1、Section_ Grammar_ spotspots第五句：them it第七句：allboth第八句：athe; appreciated appreciating第九句：was 后加 not第十一句：veryso; newbuiltnewlybuilt一、主要内容写影视评论要对于影片的评论角度做出选择。通常评论者对于评论角度的选择应持这样的原则：第一：影片最突出的方面。第二：影片中最具有特色的方面。第三：具有思想价值的方面，即：1主题思想。即影片的主旨，是指影片通过人物塑造和生活场景描绘所表现出的中心思想，主题思想是编导处理题材时所要表现的核心思想。2人物形象。影片中的人物通常是人们评论的
2、重点，一部影片人物的塑造是否具有特色，是影片能否成功的关键。影片中有哪些突出特点，值得评论。二、增分佳句1A classic movie which was called The Shawshank Redemption made a deep impression on me.经典电影肖申克的救赎给我留下了深刻印象。2In my opinion, I strongly suggest that the government should maintain the harmony of our society, accept them and give them more encouragem
3、ent.依我看，我强烈建议政府应当保持和谐社会，接受他们并且给予他们更多的鼓励。3The movie is directed by James Cameron, who is famous for the film Titanic.这部电影由詹姆斯卡梅隆导演，他曾因电影 泰坦尼克号而出名。4The film is not just a love story but also an educational film.这部电影不仅仅是一个爱情故事，更是一部具有教育意义的影片。5The series stars Zhang Jiayi, Deng Chao and Dong Jie, who all
4、 perform wonderfully.这部连续剧由张嘉译、邓超和董洁主演，他们表演得都很精彩。6It is worthwhile to watch/watching the TV play series.这部电视连续剧值得一看。题目要求英国喜剧影片憨豆先生以它幽默、夸张的喜剧效果博得全世界观众的喜爱，扮演主人公憨豆的演员也因此被冠以“世界级喜剧大师”的称号。不同阶层的人们之所以如此喜爱这部喜剧电影，是因为故事本身的幽默、演员丰富而夸张的肢体语言和非常到位的表情表演。请你根据提示写一篇 100 词左右的影评。1影片受到全世界观众的欢迎；2扮演者获得荣誉；3影片受欢迎的原因(可以自己添加 )；
5、4自己对这部影片的观后感(自己发挥) 。参考词汇：夸张 exaggerate第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为影评。2确定人称：本文以第三人称为主。3确定时态：本文为影评，所以时态应以一般现在时为主。二、构思第一段：影片的主要特点：该片幽默，演员演技高超及获得荣誉。第二段：观后感：简单表述自己对影片的态度及希望人们也来观赏。第二步：核心词汇想周全1humorous 幽默的2be_known_as 作为出名3comedic 喜剧的4quality 品质，素质5as_far_as _Im_concerned 就而言6bet 打赌第三步：由词扩句雏形现1最近我看了一部名叫憨豆先生的幽默
6、电影。(named 作定语)Recently I have watched a humorous film named Mr Bean.2它如此幽默以至于全世界的人都非常喜欢它。(so . that .)It_is_so_humorous_that_all_the_people_in_the_world_like_it_very_much.3因为这部影片，它的演员被称为“世界级喜剧大师” 。The_actor_is_known_as_“The_Comedic_Master_in_the_World”_for_this_film.4演员的滑稽、夸张的效果使这部电影很受欢迎。(make宾语形容词)
7、The_comedic_and_exaggerated_effect_of_the_actor_makes_the_film_so_popular.5尽管他愚蠢，然而他却有许多品质，如善良、诚实。(although 引导让步状语从句)Although_he_is_a_fool,_he_has_some_qualities_such_as_kindness_and_honesty.6一些人长大后忘记某些品质。(afterv.ing)Some_people_forget_some_qualities_after_growing_up.7依我看，是憨豆先生的出色表演给人们印象最深。(强调句型)As_
8、far_as_Im_concerned,_it_is_Mr_Beans_good_performances_that_impress_people_most.8希望你将来某一天去观赏这部电影。(in the future；宾语从句)I_hope_you_can_enjoy_this_film_some_day_in_the_future.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用 The reason why . 句型改写句 4The_reason_why_this_film_is_so_popular_is_the_comedic_and_exaggerated_effect_of_the_actor.2用
9、 as 引导让步状语从句和 which 引导定语从句将句 5 与句 6 合为一句Fool_as_he_is,_he_has_some_qualities_such_as_kindness_and_honesty_which_some_people_forget_after_growing_up.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Recently I have watched a humorous film named Mr Bean. It is so humorous that all the people in the world like it very much. The actor is kno
10、wn as “The Comedic Master in the World” for this film. The reason why this film is so popular is the comedic and exaggerated effect of the actor. The actor seems to be a fool in the film who is always doing something strange. Fool as he is, he has some qualities such as kindness and honesty which some people forget after growing up.As far as Im concerned, it is Mr Beans good performances that impress people most. So I hope you can enjoy this film some day in the future. I bet youll love it.
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