1、Section Writing 介绍一个民族介绍一个民族类文章属于说明文，说明文的特点是：知识性、通俗性和条理性，关键点是说明、介绍。说明文应该注意以下几个方面：一、要有该事物的知识；二、要抓住事物的特点进行说明；三、要科学地安排说明顺序；四、采用恰当的说明方法。一、写作要领介绍一个民族时，必须简要介绍其形成过程、人口数、居住地、语言、经济发展状况、传统特点，尤其是围绕一些为人所知的典型特点进行描述。描述时要做到客观准确，时态一般选择一般现在时。二、常用表达1have a population of .2with a history of .3native region 4have a tra
2、dition of .5be known for .6the most wellknown festival .题目要求请根据下表，写一篇英语短文，简要介绍一下我国朝鲜族。分布 我国东北同朝鲜交界的长白山地区，主要在吉林省来源 数百年前，从朝鲜迁来服装 白色服装，显示清净朴素的个性语言 绝大多数人讲朝鲜语，少数地方使用汉语体育活动 爱好摔跤和踢足球文化 能歌善舞；有本民族语言文字；有延边大学等上千所学校注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中国朝鲜族 Korean ethnic group in China第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为一篇
3、说明文；2确定人称：本文主要人称为第三人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一步：点出朝鲜族是我国 55 个少数民族之一。第二步：详细介绍该民族的来源、服装、语言、体育活动和文化。第三步：总结：该民族是伟大勤劳的民族。第二步：核心词汇想周全1mainly 主要的2pure 纯洁的3wrestling 摔跤4hardworking 勤劳的5stand for 代表，象征6varieties of 多种多样的第三步：由词扩句雏形现1中国朝鲜族是中国 55 个少数民族之一。The Korean ethnic group in China is one of the 55 ethnic mi
4、norities in China.2他们主要分布在我国东北同朝鲜交界的长白山地区。They are mainly in Changbai Mountain area.It is near Korea to the Northeast China.3这个地区的大部分人说朝鲜语，少数人说汉语。Most people in the area speak Korean language. Some of them speak Chinese.4他们喜欢穿白色的服装，这象征着纯洁和朴素。They like wearing white clothes.The clothes stand for bein
5、g pure and simple.5中国朝鲜族人喜爱体育运动，如摔跤和足球。People of the Korean ethnic group in China are fond of varieties of sports, such as wrestling and playing football.6而且，他们有超过一千所学校，其中延边大学是非常有名的。Whats more, they have over one thousand schools, of which Yanbian University is very famous.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用 which 引导的定语从
6、句改写句 2They are mainly in Changbai Mountain area which is near Korea to the Northeast China.2用 while 改写句 3Most people in the area speak Korean language, while some of them speak Chinese.3用 which 引导的定语从句改写句 4They like wearing white clothes which stand for pure and simple.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇The Korean ethnic g
7、roup in China is one of the 55 ethnic minorities in China.They are mainly in Changbai Mountain area which is near Korea to the Northeast China.Most of them now live in Jilin Province.Most people in the area speak Korean language, while some of them speak Chinese.They moved there from Korea hundreds
8、of years ago.They like wearing white clothes which stand for being pure and simple.People of the Korean ethnic group in China are fond of varieties of sports, such as wrestling and playing football.And also they are all good at singing and dancing.Whats more, they have over one thousand schools, of which Yanbian University is very famous.The Korean ethnic group in China is a great and hardworking ethnic minority.
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