1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Eight WritingAn introduction to a person,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,1.概念 本单元的写作任务是人物描写。人物描写是对一个人的外貌、性格、爱好以及生平事迹等进行介绍。人物描写的体裁一般是记叙文，有时也以看图作文、表格、书信、新闻等的形式出现。 2.人物描写的一般顺序 开头：对该人物进行简要地介绍，如身高、职业等； 主体：可以按照时间顺序或在事件中的主次地位进行介绍； 结尾：对该人物进行评价或者发表自己的感想。,写作指导,3.人物描写的主要内容 (1)总体描写：年龄、性别、
2、出生地、家庭及教育背景等； (2)外表、性格特点以及爱好、特长等； (3)详细介绍人物的特点以及生平大事等； (4)对人物进行总体评价。,1be born on/in/at. 2has a height of.and a weight of. 3loves./His/Her favorite.is/are./His/Her hobbies/interests are. 4is considered (to be) one of the greatest. 5is such a learned/strong-minded person that we all. 6.We can learn.fr
3、om him/her. 7.Well-known as.，he/she. 8.He/She is praised/honored for. 9will live in the hearts of.forever.,常用句式,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,请你根据以下表格信息，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，简要介绍羽毛球运动员林丹。,参考词汇：羽毛球 badminton,审题 写作要求是介绍著名羽毛球运动员林丹。写作时应注意以下几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇人物介绍，写作中应注意人物介绍的常规格式； 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主； 3.主体人称：由于是介绍别人
4、，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。,审题谋篇,谋篇 第一段：人物情况基本介绍； 第二段：介绍人物的基本经历和取得的成就； 第三段：对人物进行评价。,必备词汇 1.在岁时 _ 2.被接收 _ 3.到目前为止 _ 4.各种各样的 _ 5.庆祝某人的胜利 _,遣词造句,查看答案,at the age of.,be admitted into.,so far,a variety of/varieties of/all kinds of,celebrate ones victory,关键句式 1.林丹于1983年10月14日出生于中国福建省的龙岩市。 Lin Dan was born on Oct.14th
5、,1983，in Longyan City，Fujian Province，China. 2.林丹是一位世界著名的羽毛球运动员。 Lin Dan is a world-famous badminton player. 3.六年后他进入了国家队。 He was admitted into the national team six years later. 4.他的职业生涯开始了。 His professional career began.,5.到目前为止，他在各种各样的国际比赛中获得了很多冠军和荣誉。 So far，he has received lots of champions and
6、honors in a variety of international competitions. 6.他的奖项中包括北京奥运会和伦敦奥运会两枚金牌。 Two Olympic gold medals from Beijing and London are among his awards.,句式升级 1.请把第1句和第2句按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)Lin Dan， ，is a world-famous badminton player.(使用非谓语动词) (2)Lin Dan， ，is a world-famous badminton player.(使用定语从句),查看答案,b
7、orn on Oct.14th,1983，in Longyan City，Fujian Province，China,who was born on Oct.14th,1983，in Longyan City，Fujian Province，China,2.请把第3句和第4句按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)His professional career began six years later .(使用定语从句) (2)Six years later ，so his professional career began.(用so改为并列句),查看答案,when he was admitt
8、ed into the national team,he was admitted into the national team,3.请把第5句和第6句按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)So far，he has received lots of champions and honors in a variety of international competitions，_.(including.) (2)So far，he has received lots of champions and honors in a variety of international competitio
9、ns，_.(使用非限制性定语从句),查看答案,including the two Olympic gold medals from,Beijing and London,among which are the two Olympic gold medals,from Beijing and London,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,参考范文 Lin Dan，born on Oct.14th,1983，in Longyan City，Fujian Province，China，is a world-famous badminto
10、n player.He is 1.78 metres tall and weighs 72kg.,查看答案,Lin Dan started playing badminton at the age of five and joined the army when he was twelve.His professional career began six years later when he was admitted into the national team.He is famous for his left-handed playing style.So far，he has received lots of champions and honors in a variety of international competitions，including the two Olympic gold medals from Beijing and London.After winning a game，he often throws his sportswear to the audience to celebrate his victory. He is loved by many fans around the world.,查看答案,
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