1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Eight WritingA concert review,PART 1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,每当我们读完一本书、看完一场电影或听完一场音乐会，我们或多或少都会有一些感想。如果我们把这些感想写出来，这就成了评论。下面我们就以听一场音乐会为例，来学习一下写音乐评论的方法。 第一步：我们要列出有关这次音乐会的信息。例如：音乐会的类型(是摇滚乐还是爵士乐)；歌手、乐队；时间、地点；表演者的演技；音乐、声音及灯光效果；听众的反应等。 第二步：把列举的内容连接成句，然后再连句成篇即可。,写作指导,1.On the evenin
2、g of last Sunday，I watched the concert given by Wang Leehom. 2.During the 3-hour concert，he sang a lot of songs. 3.It shows that he has a great talent for music. 4.The audience enjoyed his performance very much. 5.Everyone felt excited at the performance. 6.The atmosphere during the concert was extr
3、emely exciting. 7.His performance is very popular with the audience. 8.I hope I will watch his performance again in the future.,常用表达,PART 2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,请按以下提示用英语写一篇日记。 1.假设昨天晚上香港著名歌手张学友在北京举办了演唱会(vocal concert)，你很幸运，买到了一张票，并且去听了他的演唱。 2.张学友是亚洲知名的音乐歌手，出了很多唱片，他在亚洲各地演唱过。他的歌经常在收音机和电视机中播放。 3.你被他的歌曲深深地
4、打动了。 日记的日期是2018年10月21日，星期日，晴。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.不要逐字翻译。,审题 1.确定体裁：本文表面上要求写一篇日记，实则写一篇音乐会的评论； 2.确定人称：本文应用第三人称来写； 3.确定时态：描述歌手信息时应该用一般现在时态，介绍音乐会的过程经过时应该用一般过去时态。 谋篇 Para.1 引入话题，介绍演唱会情况； Para.2 简要介绍著名歌星张学友的情况； Para.3 演唱效果和感受； Para.4 个人想法。,审题谋篇,_ _ _ _ _ _,必备词汇 1.举办演唱会 2.做某事是幸运的 3.录唱片 4.在收音机和电视机上播放 5.优美而自然 6.
5、被深深打动,遣词造句,查看答案,give singing performances,be lucky to do sth.,make records,be broadcast on the radio and TV,beautiful and natural,be deeply impressed by,关键句式 1.张学友是一位著名的香港流行歌手。 Zhang Xueyou is a famous Hong Kong pop singer. 2.他昨天晚上在北京举办了演唱会。 He gave a vocal concert in Beijing last night. 3.我有幸得到一张票。
6、 I got a ticket luckily. 4.我被他的演唱深深打动了。 What he sang made me very impressed.,句式升级 1.用含有同位语的句子连接句1和句2。 Zhang Xueyou， ，gave a vocal concert in Beijing last night. 2.用“beadj.to do”结构改写句3。 _ 3.用被动语态改写句4。 _,a famous Hong Kong pop singer,I was lucky to get a ticket.,I was deeply impressed by what he sang.
7、,查看答案,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,Sunday Oct.21,2018 Sunny Zhang Xueyou，a famous Hong Kong pop singer，gave a vocal concert in Beijing last night.I was lucky to get a ticket and went to his concert.,参考范文,查看答案,Zhang Xueyou is one of the most famous music singers in Asia.He has made many records and has sung in many countries in Asia.His songs are often broadcast on the radio and TV. He sang wonderfully last night.His songs were beautiful and natural.I was deeply impressed by what he sang. I hope I can go to his concert again.,查看答案,
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