1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingWriting an email,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,英文电子邮件和书信的写法大致相同，但略有差异。一般说来英文电子邮件包括以下五个部分： 1.标题栏 一般写在左上角，包括发件人姓名、邮箱地址、发件日期、收件人姓名、邮箱地址以及邮件主题。 排列格式为： FROM：发件人姓名、邮箱地址 DATE：发件日期 TO：收件人姓名、邮箱地址 SUBJECT：简明扼要地介绍邮件的内容。通常是单词、短语，偶尔用句子。,写作指导,2.称呼 位于正文的开头。如何称呼，要看发件人与收件人的关系而定。若
2、是同学、朋友，可以直呼其名；若是长辈或上级，要在姓氏前加上Mr，Miss，Mrs，Dr，Professor等表示称谓的词。 3.正文 正文要简洁明了。简单问候之后，就要开门见山地说明写邮件的目的。这部分内容的写作相对自由，但对于电子邮件的回复，须紧扣“回复”这一字眼，要“问有所答，疑有所解”。在高考中，要按照试题要求的内容来写，最重要的是表达要清楚、有条理，语言要准确、流畅。,4.信尾客套话 电子邮件的结尾客套话通常很简洁，如Best，Thanks等，一般写在右下角。 5.签名 一般写在右下角。,1.I was so pleased to receive your email and I am
3、 writing to tell you. 2.Thank you very much for all you did for me while I was in your country. Thank you also for the beautiful present you gave me. 3.I would appreciate it if you could tell me something about your school. 4.In your email you asked me for some advice on how to improve your spoken E
4、nglish. 5.I have some difficulty in learning English.I cant tell the difference between written English and spoken English.Would you please give me some advice? 6.How are you getting along with your studies？,常用表达,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假如你叫李华，是一个寄宿生，开学已经有一周了，请你写一封80词左右的电子邮件，告知你的爸爸妈妈有关你新学校的一些情况。,注意：开
5、头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：教职工staff；必修课required course；选修课selected course,写作要求是根据表格内容写一封电子邮件。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：电子邮件属于应用文，与书信的格式相似，写作中应注意常规格式。 2.主体时态：文章是介绍学校的情况，应以一般现在时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是“我”介绍学校情况，所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.对认真 _ 2.担心某人 _ 3.照顾 _ 4.竭尽全力 _,遣词造句,查看答案,be serious about,worry about sb.,take car
6、e of,do ones best,关键句式 1.There are 1,800 students and 32 classes in our school. 我们学校有1 800名学生，32个教学班。 2.There are 200 teachers and staff in our school. 我们学校有教职工200人。 3.She is very kind to us. 她很和善。 4.She is very serious about her work. 她对待工作十分严谨。 5.I have grown up and I can take care of myself. 我已长大
7、并且能照顾自己。,句式升级 1.根据括号内的要求把第1句和第2句合并成一句话。 (1)_ (用with复合结构) (2)_ (as well as),There are 1,800 students and 32 classes with 200 teachers and staff in our school.,There are 1,800 students and 32 classes as well as 200 teachers and staff in our school.,查看答案,3. 用“adj.enough to do”改写第5句话。 _,Im old enough to
8、 take care of myself.,查看答案,2.根据括号内的要求把第3句和第4句合并成一句话。 (1)_(用but构成并列句) (2)_(用though引导让步状语从句),She is very kind to us but she is very serious about her work.,Though she is very kind to us，she is very serious about her work.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,Dear Mummy and Daddy，,I have been
9、 here for a week.Everything here is new to me.There are 1,800 students and 32 classes with 200 teachers and staff in our school.Chinese，math and English are our required courses besides many selected subjects.Im in Class 3，Grade 1.There are fifty students，thirtyfive boys and fifteen girls in my class.My English teacher is our head teacher.She is very kind to us but she is very serious about her work.Please dont worry about me.Im old enough to take care of myself，and Ill do my best in my study.,查看答案,Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua,
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