1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingDescribing a place,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,介绍某一地区就是对该地区的大致状况进行描述，向人们展示该地区的地貌特征、风土人情、历史文化等。写此类文章应注意以下几点： 1.内容一般应包括该地区的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特产等。但是一定要抓住该地区的主要特色，这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。 2.要遵循一定的写作顺序。描述该地区的位置时，首先要找好中心点，再由近及远，也可以先总体后局部，或按照一定的时间顺序或空间顺序来写。描述时可以适当使用过渡性连接词。 3.介绍某一
2、地区时，除了说明它的自然景观特色之外，还应适当添加一些人文景观的变化以及人们精神面貌的变化。,写作指导,1.所处位置(Location) (1)Our school lies near/behind/in front of/by the side of/between/among. (2)There stands an old temple near the river. (3)The beautiful town is located/situated on the west of the lake/to the west of the mountain/in the west of the
3、 province. (4)Surrounded by mountains on three sides，the small village faces a clear river on the east.,常用表达,2.面积(Area) (1)Tiananmen Square，the largest square in the world，covers an area of. (2)This square is 2,000 meters long and 1,500 meters wide. (3)Our school，which takes up 63 thousand square ki
4、lometers，is very large in size. 3.人口(Population) (1)Japan has a small population of. (2)China is a developing country，with a population of over. (3)The population here is increasing year by year. (4)Eighty percent of the population here are farmers.,4.名胜(Places of interest) (1)In Sydney，there are ma
5、ny places of interest，such as the Sydney Opera House and the Sydney Harbour Bridge. (2)The Opera House in Sydney is one of the most well-known places of interest in the world. (3)Sydney is the biggest city in Australia，which has many places of interest.,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假设你是李华，看到报纸上征集介绍家乡的稿件，请
6、你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇文章介绍一下你的家乡山东省青岛市。 1.青岛位于山东省东部； 2.是我国著名的旅游城市和避暑胜地； 3.以蓝色的大海和美丽的海滨而闻名； 4.青岛啤酒闻名世界，海鲜也非常吸引人； 5.近年来青岛的发展日新月异，对我国的对外贸易发展起着重要作用。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：避暑胜地summer resort；对外贸易foreign trade,写作要求是根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡，属于说明文。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文，要包括家乡的地理位置、地
7、貌特征、历史文化、风土人情等。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3.主体人称：文章应该以第三人称为主。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.位于；坐落于 _ 2.以而闻名 _ 3.成千上万的 _ 4.在中起着重要作用 _ 5.在的发展中 _,遣词造句,查看答案,be located in/lie in,be famous for,tens of thousands of,play an important part/role in,in the development of.,关键句式 1.My hometown Qingdao is located in the east of Shandong
8、 Province. 我的家乡青岛位于山东省东部。 2.It is a famous tourist city and summer resort in China. 它是中国著名的旅游城市和避暑胜地。 3.Qingdao Beer is made in Qingdao. 青岛啤酒是在青岛制造的。 4.It is known all over the world. 它世界闻名。,2.根据括号内的要求连接句3和句4。 (1)_(用过去分词短语作定语) (2)_(用非限制性定语从句),Qingdao Beer made in Qingdao is known all over the world.
9、,Qingdao Beer, which is made in Qingdao, is known all over the world.,查看答案,句式升级 1.用过去分词短语作状语连接句1和句2。 _,Located in the east of Shandong Province, my hometown Qingdao is a famous tourist city and summer resort in China.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,QingdaoMy Hometown Have you ever be
10、en to my hometownQingdao? Its a beautiful and attractive city.,Located in the east of Shandong Province，my hometown Qingdao is a famous tourist city and summer resort in China.It is famous for its blue sea as well as beautiful beaches.Tens of thousands of people pay a visit to Qingdao for sightseeing every summer.Whats more，Qingdao Beer made in Qingdao is known all over the world.And delicious seafood is also a strong attraction in Qingdao. Great changes have taken place in Qingdao in recent years.It plays an important part in the development of the foreign trade of our country.,查看答案,
浙公网安备33030202001339号