1、Unit 4 Body language,技法点拨,内容索引,典例展示,写作训练,Period Five WritingReflective writing： letter of concern,技法点拨,本单元的写作任务是写一封慰问信。慰问信用于向收信人表示关怀和问候。写慰问信要注意态度诚恳，语气真挚。时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主；人称主要用第一人称或第二人称。 慰问信的结构一般如下： (1)首先说明写慰问信的原因； (2)向对方的遭遇表示同情并鼓励对方或者表达自己想帮助对方的愿望或具体措施； (3)在结尾处可再次表示写信者的良好祝愿或同情之心。,1.开头常用语： (1)Im shock
2、ed/awfully sorry to hear that. (2)It was a great shock to hear that. (3)It broke my heart to hear that. (4)I just cant tell you how sad I was when I heard that. (5)I cant tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that. (6)I am writing to express my deep sympathy/care for you.,2.主体常用语： (1)I understand h
3、ow you feel now. (2)I know the way you feel very well. (3)Youll always have a support in me. (4)Its true that attitude decides everything.So you should never give up no matter what happens. (5)Please let me know if there is anything I can do. (6)If I can be of any help，please dont hesitate to let me
4、 know.,3.结尾常用语： (1)Im looking forward to. (2)I hope our caring will help to comfort you. (3)I hope that time will take away the sorrow of your recent loss. (4)Remember that my heart and my thoughts are with you.,典例展示,假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Ella因即将跟随父母到另外一个国家生活和学习，她情绪非常低落。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件，表示安慰。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.
5、信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,范文赏读 Dear Ella， Im sorry to hear that youre upset these days because youll have to move to a new country. Truly，its hard to leave a place where youve lived for many years and to say goodbye to your friends.I understand that youll have to face a whole new enviro
6、nment where you barely know anyone.However，things wont be as bad as you think.You can still keep in touch with your friends through telephone，emails，etc.,Besides，moving to a new country will give you a chance to learn new things，meet more people and make friends.Isnt that great? I hope youll cheer u
7、p soon and get ready to enjoy your new life! Yours， Li Hua,写作训练,假设你叫李明，你的英国朋友Andrew来上海旅游，回国后因天气和旅途劳累等原因病倒了，请你用英语给他写一封慰问信。词数100左右。,一、审题 写作要求是写一封慰问信，对朋友生病表示慰问。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一封慰问信。写作时注意慰问信的写作特点。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是表达对朋友生病的慰问，所以人称应该以第一人称和第二人称为主。,二、谋篇 慰问信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括以下几个部分：信头、称
8、呼、正文、结束语和签名。其中信头部分为写信人地址和写信日期，常省略。 慰问信的正文通常分为三部分： 第一部分：引入话题(同情对方遭遇，表明写信目的)； 第二部分：表示慰问(向对方的处境表示理解、关心，并给予鼓励或者提供帮助等)； 第三部分：总结全文(表达美好祝愿)。,一、必备词汇 1.由导致的 _ 2.玩得开心 _ 3.不同于 _ 4.如果有必要 _ 5.看医生 _ 6.赶上，追上 _,be caused by.,have a wonderful time/have fun,be different from.,if (it is) necessary,see a doctor,catch u
9、p with,二、关键句式 1.听说你从中国回到家就病了，我很难过。 I hear that you have been ill since you returned home from China and I am very sorry. 2.我们在一起玩得非常高兴，完全忘记了上海的气候和纽约的气候非常不一样。 We had a wonderful time while you were here，but we forgot that the weather in Shanghai was very different from that in New York.,3.在这么短的时间内旅行了
10、这么长的距离后，你一定也非常累了。 You must also have been very tired after you had travelled such a long distance in such a short time. 4.所以我建议你休息一下，如果有必要，去看医生吧。 So I suggest that you should get some rest and if it is necessary，go to see a doctor.,三、句式升级 1.分别用现在分词短语和不定式短语作状语改写第1句。 you have been ill since you return
11、ed home from China，I am very sorry.(现在分词短语作状语) I you have been ill since you returned home from China.(不定式作状语) 2.用分词短语作状语改写第2句。,Hearing that,am very sorry to hear that,We had a wonderful time while you were here，forgetting that the,weather in Shanghai was very different from that in New York.,3.把aft
12、er用作介词改写第3句。4.用省略形式改写第4句。,You must also have been very tired after travelling such a long distance,in such a short time.,So I suggest you get some rest，and if necessary，go to see a doctor.,用适当的过渡词语把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,参考范文 Dear Andrew， I am very sorry to hear that you have been ill sinc
13、e you returned home from China，and that your illness was caused by the bad weather in Shanghai last week. We had a wonderful time while you were here，forgetting that the weather in Shanghai was very different from that in New York.You must also have been very tired after travelling such a long distance in such a short time.So I suggest you get some rest，and if necessary，go to see a doctor.,Dont worry too much about your studies.Youll catch up with others soon once you recover. I am looking forward to your early recovery. Sincerely yours， Li Ming,
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