1、Unit 5 Canada“The True North”,技法点拨,内容索引,典例展示,写作训练,Period Five WritingDescriptive writing：a report about trips,技法点拨,本单元的写作任务是写一篇旅游报告。旅游报告是描写旅游中的所见所闻，并以此表达自己思想感情的描述性文章。在描写过程中，用简洁的语言说明景点的地理位置、人文历史以及旅游路线等，同时可以抒发感情、边叙边议。 一篇好的旅游报告不仅能使人如临其境，还能启迪思想，陶冶情操。文章大致包括以下三个方面的内容： 1.旅游报告的主题； 2.所见所闻； 3.个人感受。,1.The plac
2、e is located/situated in. 2.The place is known for. 3.It covers an area of. 4.It has a history of. 5.It is worth visiting. 6.We paid a visit to. 7.I really enjoy the trip to. 8.The trip to.impressed me greatly.,典例展示,假如你今年暑假第一次去厦门旅行。请根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍其景点并谈谈你的感受。,注意：词数100左右。 参考词汇：曾厝垵Zengcuoan；鼓浪屿Gulan
3、gyu Island,范文赏读 This summer I went to visit Xiamen for the first time.This journey left a deep impression on me. Xiamen lies in the southeast of Fujian Province，and Gulangyu Island is one of the most famous places in Xiamen.Thousands of tourists go to Gulangyu Island by ship every day.There is a vil
4、lage called Zengcuoan，where we can taste different kinds of delicious snacks.Xiamen University is a beautiful place which you must visit.After visiting it，you can find it is a wonderful thing to go to university.Xiamen is surrounded by the sea.You can go to pick up shells，chase the waves and swim in
5、 the sea. In short，what a fascinating city Xiamen is！,写作训练,假设你叫李华，寒假你和父母去墨尔本(Melbourne)旅游。请你按照以下要点为校刊英语园地写一篇100词左右的报告，分享你的旅游经历。 1.墨尔本街道干净、建筑各异，是座花园城市； 2.在唐人街吃饭、购物； 3.观看世界上最小的企鹅归巢。 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,一、审题 写作要求是写一篇旅游报告。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇旅游报告。写作时注意旅游报告的写作特点。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍自己和父母的旅
6、行见闻，所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。,二、谋篇 第一部分 开门见山，直接点题。总说一下本次旅游，引出下文。 第二部分 对景区详细介绍。 第三部分 对美丽的景区的评价。,一、必备词汇 1.享受旅行 _ 2.古老和现代的风格 _ 3.与不同 _ 4.不但而且 _ 5.直到才 _ 6.吸引游客 _,enjoy a journey,ancient and modern styles,be different from.,not only.but (also).,not.until.,attract the visitors,二、关键句式 1.墨尔本是座美丽的花园城市。 Melbourne i
7、s a beautiful garden city. 2.它有干净的街道，古老和现代风格的不同建筑。 It has clean streets and various buildings of both ancient and modern styles. 3.唐人街里的食物非常好吃。 The food is delicious in Chinatown. 4.那里卖的货物也非常特别。 The goods sold there are also quite special.,三、句式升级 1.用介词with短语作定语合并第1句和第2句话。 _ 2.用not only.but also.合并第3
8、句和第4句话。 _,Melbourne is a beautiful garden city with clean streets and various buildings of both ancient and modern styles.,Not only is the food delicious in Chinatown，but the goods sold there are also quite special.,用适当的过渡词语把以上的词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。,参考范文 I enjoyed a pleasant journey to Melb
9、ourne with my parents in my winter holidays. Melbourne is a beautiful garden city with clean streets and various buildings of both ancient and modern styles.The building styles are very different from what I saw before.We had our lunch in Chinatown.There are not only Chinese restaurants，but also Tha
10、iland and Japanese restaurants.,Not only is the food delicious in Chinatown，but the goods sold there are also quite special.We didnt leave until we bought too much to carry.It was wonderful to watch the smallest penguins in the world go home.They were so lovely that they attracted so many visitors.,
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