1、专题十一短文改错说明类（90 分钟 100 分）考点 01：冠词 3 颗星考点 02：代词 3 颗星考点 03：介词和介词短语 2 颗星考点 04: 名词 3 颗星 考点 05：主谓一致 5 颗星考点 06：形容词和副词 5 颗星考点 08：非谓语动词 5 颗星考点 09：动词的时态和语态 5 颗星考点 10：定语从句 3 颗星考点 11 名词性从句 3 颗星考点 12 并列连词 4 颗星考点 13 状语从句 3 颗星考点 28：短文改错说明文 5 颗星一、语法填空1 阅读下面材料,在空白处填入恰当的内容(1 个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。Sweet wormwood (青蒿) is a c
2、ommon plant in China, it has the power to cure the deadly disease called malaria (疟疾). Tu Youyou (be) the woman who uses the plants special power to save millions of lives. The Chinese scientist won a Nobel Prize because of her great contribution.On October 5, Tu was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize in
3、Physiology or Medicine. She shared the prize with two other scientists from the US and Japan. Tu is the first native Chinese person (receive) a Nobel Prize in natural sciences.Tu was modest about receiving the award:“Its a success for the whole research team.”She also thinks is scientists duty to fi
4、ght for the health of all humans.When Tu joined the national research team to find the medicine could fight against malaria in the 1960s and 1970s, things were hard. The team didnt have advanced equipment back then. Tu used to test (medicine) by eating them herself. Her teamsearched old Chinese medi
5、cine books hand and tested over 2,000 traditional recipes.Once Tu (return) home after traveling for six months.Her little daughter didnt recognize her and hid from the “strange woman”. To do research,Tu also had to move around a lot.Finally,Tu found (青蒿素) in sweet wormwood in1971. She spent the next
6、 decades ( try) to improve themedicine. According to World Health Organization, about 200 million people suffer malaria around the world, and about half a million die each year. Artemisinin is still the most effective treatment against malaria known today.Tu never complains about how hard she works.
7、 I feel more rewarded when I see so many cured patients, ”she said.2 阅读下面短文,在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。According to a recent survey, violence did exist in schools. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also (express) their great concern about it. Experts hope whole society pays more at
8、tention to the mental health of adolescents.Nowadays, school violence is a hot issue. I think this is a phenomenon, which (call) for our great concern. We should make every effort (prevent) school violence happening at school, for more and more students would drop out of school if their personal (sa
9、fe) could not be guaranteed. In fact, violence can be learned. (actual),children learn violence behavior from adults or from they see on television or on the Internet.If I meet with school violence, I will not answer violence with violence, for it will result in (much) fighting. I will tell my teach
10、ers or parents about it. I think they will help me deal with it well and they will protect me from the bad guys.All in all, we students should behave (we) and keep away violence.3 阅读下面短文,在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Did you grow up in one culture,your parents came from another,and you are now living i
11、n a (total)different country? If so,then you are a third-culture kid.The term“thirdculture kid” (use)in the 1960s for the first time by Dr.Ruth.She first came across this phenomenon while (research)North American children living in India.In general,third-culture kids benefit from (they)intercultural
12、 experience and they often reach excellent academic results.Yet many (difficulty)may arise from this phenomenon.Third-culture kids may not be able to adapt themselves completely their new surroundings.Also,they often find it hard (develop)new friendship.Additionally,for a third-culture kid,it is oft
13、en easier to move to a new country to return to his homeland.For example,after living in Australia for many years,Louis finally returned to the country she was born.She didnt know anything about current TV shows fashion trends.And she didnt share the same values as other teens of her age.4.阅读下面材料,在空
14、白处填上适当的内容(不多于 3 个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。“Why do we have to learn about these useless things?“This is _ teachers have heard students complain about most commonly. In such cases, we may tell the students such a fable(寓言):One night, a group of herdsmen were about to leave the campsite _there appeared a bunch o
15、f bright light . They knew that God would be there, so they looked forward to _( get) wishes from God. God began to speak: “You have to collect along the way a number of pebbles. Tomorrow night, you _(be) very happy, but you can also be regretful.“ Then God disappeared.The herdsmen were very _( disa
16、ppoint), because they did not expect that God had told them _(do) all these meaningless things. However, in any case, after all, that was Gods will, Although there was some dissatisfaction, they were still picking over some stones. _this way, they took a day. When night fell, they camped. All of a s
17、udden, they found that all the pebbles _picked had turned into diamonds. They were delighted, but at the same time, they felt very sorry and _(regret) that they did not collect more pebbles.Now we feel that knowledge is useless, like pebbles, _in the future, may become endless wealth.二、短文改错5.假定英语课上老
18、师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically.an
19、d also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enj
20、oyed studying difference kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把
21、多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。3. Im gladly to receive your novel. Thank you for such lovely a gift, for I had been expecting it for a long time. This novel offers to me more understanding of American society and daily life. I know youre
22、 interesting in Chinese festivals, and therefore I have chosen an album of paper cutting for you. Paper cutting is unique form of Chinese cultural relics, that is often used as a decoration for a joyful atmosphere. I hope it will bring happiness and lucks to your family as it always did in China.4.
23、Im expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture on person.参考答案一、语法填空答案： but; is; to receive; it; that/which; medicines; by/on/at/in; returned; trying; from解析： 本文是一篇记叙文。屠呦呦是中国第一个获得诺贝尔医学奖的女科学家,她带领她的团队发现了青蒿素,从而挽救了数百万人的生命。考查连词。空前语境为“青蒿在中国是一种常见的植物”;空后语境为“它有治愈致命疾病疟疾的能力”。 根据空处前后语境可以判断,两句为
24、转折关系,故填转折连词 but。考查时态和主谓一致。根据该句中的“who uses the plants special power”可知,该句应用一般现在时。又因主语为 Tu Youyou,故填 is。考査动词不定式。根据该句中的“ the first native Chinese person”可以判断,该句应用动词不定式做 person 的后置定语。考査 it 的用法。分析该句结构可知,动词不定式短语 to fight for the health of all humans 做真正的主语,it 做形式主语。考查定语从句。分析该句结构可知,该句为定语从句,先行词为 medicine,空处
25、在从句中做主语,故填 which 或 that 引导该定语从句。査名词的数。根据该句中的 them 可以判断,空处应填名词复数。考查介词。by hand 意为“用手”;on hand, at hand,in hand 意为“在手头”。根据语境可知这四个介词都对。考查时态。根据下句的“ Her little daughter didnt recognize her”可知,这里陈述的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。考査非谓语动词。spend time doing sth.为固定搭配,意为“花费时间做某事”,故填trying。考査动词短语。suffer from 为固定搭配,意为 “(因疾病、痛苦等)
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